Sunday, June 9, 2024
Kin: Rooted in Hope by Carole Boston Weatherford
More than Words: So Many Ways to Say What We Mean by Roz MacLean
Standing in the Need of Prayer: A Modern Retelling of the Classic Spiritual by Carole Boston Weatherford
Saturday, June 8, 2024
As the Crow Flies by Melanie Gillman
Evaluation
For this book, I’ll be evaluating the illustrations, characters, and theme.
First, the illustrations in this graphic novel are all done in colored pencil. Gillman (2017) uses this medium to beautifully depict the outdoors, capturing the many colorful layers of nature while also portraying its rough textures. Some of the most stark illustrations in this book help to establish the mood of the scene; specifically, when the characters find themselves around a campfire. There are two of these scenes in the book, and each time, the campfire has a dark, uncomfortable, almost angry tone to it rather than a cozy or safe tone. Gillman’s (2017) portrayal of these scenes matches the mood of what is going on at the time: as Bee tells stories about the history of this camp, it is revealed to both Charlie and the reader that the ideas and principles behind this camp are based in its historical oppression of Black and queer people. The deep, disconcerting red of these campfire scenes enhances Bee’s tone-deaf, white feminist rage, as well as Charlie’s growing discomfort with her place at this camp.
One aspect of the illustrations in this novel that I didn’t like as much, from a storytelling perspective, were the several wide and close-up establishing panels of nature. At times it felt appropriate, given that the group is on a hike, and these are scenes along the route. Other times it felt like these visualizations of nature were repetitive and detracting from the progression of the story. However, Gillman’s (2017) landscapes are beautiful, and other readers may enjoy the quiet, peaceful moments that they bring in the book.
Next up are the characters. Charlie, our main character, is a Black and queer teen whose relationship with God seems to be wearing thin. She is set up to be a dynamic character who will move from hesitating to speak up, to finding the confidence and the energy to speak up and create space for herself and others. However, she never fully gets to experience this character climax, as the book seemingly ends mid-plot (I will discuss this in the last paragraph of this section). That being said, her reactions to and frustrations with the camp, its leaders, and other campers are conveyed well through Gillman’s (2017) illustrations and dialogue, as well as Charlie’s internal thoughts, and she is a relatable character in personality, beliefs, and identity. Next, Bee is the main leader of this backpacking trip, as well as the main antagonist of the book. She often makes tone-deaf comments, excuses racist history in favor of continuing practices that only serve white women, and is frequently dismissive of Charlie’s struggles along the trail. The reader can feel her dismissive attitude through awkward excuses and body language, making her a strong antagonist. Readers may find this character similar to other adults in their lives who are meant to be leaders but lack the self-reflection to build inclusive spaces, and thus perpetuate harmful biases. Other characters, like Adelaide, receive jumpy and unrealistic character development, or little character development, which pulled me out of the narrative sometimes. I would have liked to see greater exploration of some of the main cast of characters, and while each in their own right is enjoyable, I didn’t feel like they were fully developed within the bounds of this novel. There is a mix of strong and flat characterization in this book, but I still found that I enjoyed engaging with the main characters and rooting for them.
The theme that stood out the most to me is that white feminism perpetuates harm and exclusion when left uncriticized and unchallenged. The book also addresses the importance of solidarity and intersectionality within community, and shows that these relationships can be the push needed to dismantle white feminism. Unfortunately, these themes never quite reach fruition in this volume. Like the characters, the themes are set up to accomplish more than they are able to because of where the story cuts off. The lack of a final conclusion aside, the themes of this book are socially relevant and relatable, as well as presented in ways that the target audience will be able to connect with.
This book, upon first read, seems to end abruptly. While resolving the issues set up in this narrative would serve an overall benefit, the story itself is strong enough to be enjoyed by readers as it is. That being said, the book is part of an ongoing web comic; I read the rest of what is available online, but did not include any of that material in this review. On the publisher’s website, the book description calls this “The first collection of Melanie Gillman’s extraordinary webcomic” (Iron Circus Comics). With the promise of future volumes, hopefully both the plot, themes, and characters will see a more final and full development. As series go, I would still say that this volume ends at an awkward point, leaving the reader hanging in uncertainty. If there were some indication of future volumes, whether a note at the end of the book or even a volume number on the spine, I think that would help readers—especially those who don’t at first know that this is a published web comic—better understand that there is more to come beyond this book. Happy reading!
References
Gillman, M. (2017). As the crow flies (M. Gillman, Illus.). Iron Circus Comics.
Iron Circus Comics. (n.d.). As the crow flies. https://ironcircus.com/product/as-the-crow-flies/
Wonder Walkers by Micha Archer
Evaluation
In this section, I will evaluate the illustrations, style and language, and tone.
The illustrations in this book are done with collage, and masterfully portray the intricacies of nature, creating a sense of wonder for the reader on the literary wonder walk. Because of the collage format, the reader occasionally glimpses sheet music or a string of letters mixed into nature, which artistically comments on how nature is both poetic and musical. The collage medium also portrays the layers and depth of nature, and invites readers to peer closely at the patterns and colors that Archer mixes together to convey beaches, flowers, forests, and more. In that sense, the medium enhances the theme of the book, which is to creatively observe nature. Just as the two kids on their walk express wonder at everything around them, the readers of this picture book will express wonder at how the collages reflect the experience of wandering through nature: up close, there are many small parts that work to bring the world to life each day. From far away, the view is beautiful, bright, and picturesque.
The language in this book also bolsters its theme. This picture book is almost entirely phrased in questions, which enhance the aspect of ‘wonder’. Questions such as “Is fog the river’s blanket”, and “Is the moon the world’s night-light” encourage the reader to consider the world in a creative and relatable way, much like the collages do (Archer, 2021, unpaged). In sync, the words and illustrations of this book create wonder both in an awe-inspiring way, and in a way that sparks curiosity—the action of wondering. Another example of language choice is the comparison of plant roots to toes: when presented with this idea, readers may find themselves stretching their own toes, grounding themselves as much as roots ground their plants (Archer, 2021). Overall, the language in this book encourages the reader to creatively ask questions about nature in a way that addresses the human and artistic aspects of nature, alongside the scientific parts.
Young et. al. (2020) describes tone as “the author’s attitude toward the subject or audience” (p. 21). Archer (2021) employs a trusting attitude towards the young audience of this book: that is, she trusts them to understand the message without being too straightforward about it. While employing complex art and asking questions, Archer (2021) doesn’t answer these questions for the audience. Rather, the main response to these questions is the phrase “I wonder” (Archer, 2021, unpaged). I believe this response fosters an overall creative and curious tone in this book, and also encourages the practice of being curious without having immediate answers at hand.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this book, and found myself engaged with both the art and the text. Happy reading!
References
Archer, M. (2021). Wonder Walkers, (M. Archer, Illus.). Nancy Paulsen Books.
Young, T. A., Bryan, G., Jacobs, J. S., Tunnel, M. O. (2020). Children’s literature, briefly. Pearson Education, Inc.
Friday, June 7, 2024
The Cursed Moon by Angela Cervantes
Evaluation
For my review of this book, I will be going over setting, characters, and theme.
Cervantes’ setting is crucial to setting the tone for this book, and her writing immerses the reader into the story. One example throughout the book is the blood moon, which takes place on the first night of the book and is part of the catalyst of events. There are many moon phases that could have been used to dissuade Rafa from storytelling: a blue moon, a full moon, or perhaps even a new moon, which would result in a very dark night. The choice to use a blood moon heightens the eeriness of the story: the light is off-putting, and ‘blood’ signifies death and danger. In another example of setting, Cervantes writes:
They trampled through wild brush and grass that reached their knees, while wisps of fog reached for them like thick fingers pulling them deeper into the woods. Soon they were so deep into the woods that they could no longer see Ms. Martin’s house behind them nor the glint of the afternoon sun (p. 142).
As I will write later, the book’s antagonist often appears to manifest with the fog. The description of the fog having “fingers”, almost grabbing or luring them, creates fear that the characters here are not alone. As they trample through undergrowth, it is clear that they aren’t on a path, and the further they go from Ms. Martin’s house, the likelier it is that they could become lost in the woods. The reader can almost feel the forest scraping at their legs, creating a feeling of being pulled or grabbed. This part of the woods, too, is dark despite being sunny outside. Overall, the atmosphere of somewhere deep and dark, amidst a potentially malevolent fog, creates an immersive experience for the reader of being lost and surrounded by danger. This setting persists nearly every time the characters are in the woods, which establishes that the reader should and must be scared of this place.
Cervantes writes fantastic characters in this novel. Rafa Fuentes is a strong protagonist and main character. He is many things: a protective older brother, a helpful friend, a creative storyteller, as well as a frustrated and sometimes angry son. His complicated relationship with his mom, Nikki, is fleshed out through memories and dialogue, giving the reader a full picture of why Rafa harbors resentment towards her. Many of Rafa’s above characteristics are fleshed out through his actions; Cervantes does a fantastic job of demonstrating who Rafa is through his relationships and how the people in his life respond to him. Brianna Fuentes, Rafa’s younger sister, is also a strong character. While Cervantes demonstrates their relationship through shared memories, mischief, and concern for the other, Brianna often acts outside of Rafa’s wishes for her, and is shown to have her own opinions, especially in regards to their mother. Their similarities and differences create a realistic sibling relationship that adds to the familial tension in the Fuentes family. Next is Ms. Martin, a neighbor of Rafa’s family. She is the mentor figure of this story: a role that is strengthened by her cryptic warning to Rafa in the first chapter. It establishes her as someone who might know more than they seem, and her sometimes off-putting nature fits the eeriness of this book. The reader’s opinion of Ms. Martin fluctuates with that of the other characters, which I believe strengthens her role as mentor. She isn’t immediately trusted; rather, trust must be built between her and Rafa, which also creates tension in the book as time runs out. The last character I’ll discuss is the antagonist, The Caretaker. The strength of this antagonist cements this book as a memorable one. The Caretaker is especially creepy, which I would attribute to the way that Cervantes disembodies him across space and time. He is able to reach Rafa through texts, fog, and even dreams, making him unpredictable and dangerous. Overall, this book has fantastic characters that weave well together, are believable and relatable people, and enhance the story that Cervantes tells.
Lastly, I loved the themes presented in this book, especially the theme of hope found in repairing family relationships, and breaking harmful cycles. One constant point of tension throughout the book, and that is critical to understanding Rafa, is the fact that their mother Nikki is returning from prison. As previously mentioned, Rafa is resentful towards Nikki because of her neglect, broken promises, and drug use that lead to her arrest. Narratively, Nikki is as much a ghost as any of the other specters haunting this story: Rafa even compares her to “the ghosts he [writes] about” (Cervantes, 2023, p. 109). Her presence is felt, but the audience never sees her outside of memories and discussion about her. However, outside of Rafa’s perspective, Nikki is not shown as having a predetermined fate like the other ghosts of this tale: Bianca, Abuela, and other characters have hope for her. Thus, as Rafa confronts his own similarities to Nikki alongside a looming curse, he has to learn where harmful cycles end and where hope begins. I could say so much more about these themes, but out of concern of giving too much away, I’ll leave my analysis here. As young readers engage with this book, I believe they will find that Cervantes trusts them to come to their own conclusions regarding these themes. Additionally, I believe that readers with any sort of complex relationships to their family will connect with Cervantes’ idea that people are open-ended stories, and there is always hope in the ‘endings’ available to everyone, whatever that may look like. Happy reading!
References
Cervantes, A. (2023). The cursed moon. Scholastic Press.
Thursday, June 6, 2024
Books For 7th-12th Grade
Welcome to my digital bookshelf! This post will feature books for readers ranging from 7th to 12th grade. I will update this post throughout the course of the semester.
As the Crow Flies by Melanie Gillman
Kin: Rooted in Hope by Carole Boston Weatherford, illustrated by Jeffery Boston Weatherford
Books For PreK-6th Grade
Welcome to my digital bookshelf! This post will feature books for readers ranging from preK to 6th grade. I will update this post throughout the course of the semester.
Wonder Walkers by Micha Archer
The Cursed Moon by Angela Cervantes
More Than Words: So Many Ways to Say What We Mean by Roz Maclean
Standing in Need of Prayer: A Modern Retelling of the Classic Spiritual by Carole Boston Weatherford, illustrated by Frank Morrison
Good Different by Meg Eden Kuyatt
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Welcome to my digital bookshelf! This post will feature books for readers ranging from preK to 6th grade. I will update this post throughout...
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Genre This book is in the historical nonfiction genre. Targeted Age Group The targeted age group for this book is ages 6-9. Summary This ...
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